Second draft of comic, I initially wanted the comic to be longer, and to have been drawn on A4 paper, but whilst trying to develop this concept further I found that I didn't like it, and that it wasn't really working. After this draft I returned to the original draft, and tried to better it again but in a different way.

This is the final draft of my initial plan for the comic, it contains allotted areas for dialogue, and a plan for how to utilise the film negatives. Due to restrictions of the method I decided to use, I reverted to a more simplistic style, and approach to this draft, I intended for most of the detail work to be done whilst painting the panels, rather than methodically planned in advance.

These are the watercolour and ink panels for the comic before having dialogue added, and before being compiled in the correct order in photoshop.